The new year is much more then just a number of passing days,it can be a whole fresh beginning or more like a white page.I my self consider the new year as a new start with new goals new ideas and better plans.I think that people should get advantage of this occasion by correcting them selves and avoiding making the same mistakes that they have probably made last year.Everybody ought to try to be a better person then he was in the passing years.Maybe you have hurt someone so you should apologize to him and behave well so that you can be respected and loved by people who are surrounding you,try to spend more time with your beloved ones as much as you can,gather your family members make a dinner and invite your closes friends,try to be always positive,open-minded and look forwards, at the end of the day it is all about the future and being successful,never be self-centered or selfish. Always show your friends and the closest people to your heart that you love them and care a bout them by a small gesture like offering some chocolate or flowers.That's how you should start this new year.To end I wish you guys a happy new year full of love,health, and joy.
the topic is a good one but i think you could have written more than you did,it was important that you gave advice and talked about the new year.But like I said you can use this topic in an amazing way,for example more new year's resolutions and the things that you personally will try to do.
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ReplyDeleteto begin with , I wish you happy new year too.I found your ideas very interesting especially when you claims that this new year is a new start , I share this point too but I think that you can say anymore about this topic ! and I also noticed that there is a lack of organization , you've let your mind free , you wrote the ideas as they came to your mind you have to work on the method , the process ! keep writing and developing your ideas and feelings because you have an easy feather .
ReplyDeletei totally agree with you, you are right.
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ReplyDeleteIthink that you have a good style of writing and good ideas, but I'm not with you when you said that the new year is a new start with new goals and new ideas, because we are not obliged to change our goals and ideas every year,but in stead to change only our bad ideas,so try to make your ideas more precise.Moreover,Ifound that there are a lot of things missing in your paragraph,like ponctuation,and connectors.personally, i felt lost when i read you paragraph for the first time.But it still good, and just try to apply whatyou've learnt about writting a paragraph.